Monday, December 1, 2014

NaNoWriMo 2014 Wrap-Up

Topics: |   Update   |  Word Count  |  Scene of the Day   |  Translation  |
Update
I finished up the NaNoWriMo yesterday, but worked more on the last short for it today. There're still 7 more pages to edit in the short, and after that, whether it's actually the final short of the novel is up in the air. I originally had 7 shorts planned for the first Morgana Lugus Investigations novel, and 4 of them, one of them only mostly done, were more than enough to beat the word count challenge.

I plan, right now, to finish the short up, post it, and then keep working. I'll keep up the posting if I do, so be sure to keep following.


Final Word Count: 52,927


Scene of the Day
I saw the wall coming at me fast, and there wasn’t a thing I could do to stop my momentum.
Agony launched through my entire being when I came to a stop.
I slid down to the floor, the wall where I’d hit now nothing but powder raining down on my head.
The choking dust only made the ringing in my ears louder, and my vision’s edges greyer.
It didn’t take a doctor to figure out that impact alone had shattered several bones, and what made it worse was that I didn’t have time to wallow in the pain.
Not with her coming for me without so much as a pause to consider the various ways I might be dead in the next few minutes.
“You shouldn’t have come here, Faery. Your kind has powerful magic, but your frailty makes up for it. You break so easily. It’s no wonder the smaller ones are our food.”
I forced myself up to a seated position, taking a second to blink away the sparks dancing in front of me.
“Not tha’ I can… really argue with ya’… since ya’ just ‘bout shattered me… but I’m not as frail as all that,” I huffed.
Then, I pushed myself to my feet, and a whole new wave of pain lifted through me.
“You are still standing,” she agreed with a small amount of awe. “Still, your short blink of an existence isn’t going to last much longer.”
I cursed when I realized I’d dropped my gun.
Which I discovered when the metal snapped under her foot and a silver cloud of smoke rose up.
She immediately jumped to the side, staring at the broken weapon and its silver bullets in fear.
“You brought some dangerous toys. And your spine’s not as snapped as I was expecting, clearly. That thing about you being more than just a little Fae wasn’t boasting, was it?”
“You have no idea,” I mused.
I shut my eyes and concentrated.
If she killed me while I wasn’t looking, that would be a pretty ugly way to go, but at the time, I needed to throw every bit of my concentration into what I was about to do.
“Sorry ta’ disappoint. But, on the plus side, bein’ coy’s done, now ya’ve attempted ta’ kill an APD liaison.”
“Have something you can throw at me while you’re passed out?” she laughed.
I took one more deep breath, and then I lifted my trembling hands to point palms-up at her.
“I call on fire. Under this domain of darkness and death, come to heed my beckoning, oh purifying flames of the Archangels,” I intoned.
The air around the room instantly heated up, and shimmering waves started moving between us.
I opened my eyes once more to find her staring at me in surprise.
“Oh, good! A Fae, and a witch. Now that makes this a bit more interesting. I was worried I’d be bored, there, for a second.”
Her hands stretched out, and her fingernails extended into jagged claws as she approached me.
“I haven’t had a heretic’s blood for ages!”
“Yeah, tha’s great, but I’m not big on bein’ food. Great spirit of the djinn, I call on your burning power. I give this mortal body as vessel, and ask you use it to give me your aid!”
Around my hand, smoke rose with a loud hiss.
Brilliant, fiery red light enveloped the appendage as the magic rose, consuming more of my energy by the second as it expanded.
I really didn’t like using the double-edged sword of explicitly offensive spells.
It had a nasty habit of consuming too much, too fast, and it could end up killing me before the vampiress had the chance to even touch me again.
The decades of practice with magic in all its forms made the chance of overexerting myself right into a grave smaller, but it still existed.
Unfortunately, it couldn’t be helped, since that was really the only option I had right then, unless I wanted to be snapped like a twig.
“Flames that stoke the soul-charring heat of Jahannam, I give thee release through divine word of power: Aduro!”
With a snap of displaced reality, the building energy rushed forward and ignited.
To her credit, she was fast enough to try to react.
It did her no good, though.
And oh boy did the fire hit.
A massive burst of white fire flared through the room, seeming like I’d thrown napalm at her chest for all the fire now writhing around her frozen body.
“You bitch!” she screeched, her furious voice snarling at me from within the pillar of flames.
The pyre suddenly sputtered and died, and the charred vampiress wobbled where she stood.
Even the incredible amount of damage didn’t erase the look of homicidal rage swirling in her lensed eyes.
In fact, the ugly, slowly closing black marks covering a majority of her body made it look even more intimidating, to my lack of surprise.
With every step towards me, she seemed to grow taller.
“Do you have any idea how much that hurt!?”
I started backing away with every move forward she took.
At the edges of my vision, I noticed that all the light in the room seemed to vanish as she did, making it so she was the only thing visible.
I realized right around then how stupid I’d been to underestimate that vampire based on the quality of her ghoul.
Vampires, while not the undead monsters portrayed in mythology, still aren’t close to being human.
The older they get, the more they add to their hellish bag of magical tricks.
Possibly the single most dangerous of their skills is the geas, a kind of psychic general purpose tool, which vampires tend to use to trap their preys’ minds.
And it was initiated via eye contact.
Every part of my being gave me natural defenses from it, normally.
When I’d brought my mental barriers down more than usual to play to her sense of security, I’d made a big mistake.
Shite.”
“That’s right, Faery Witch. Took you long enough,” she sneered.
I brought my psychic walls to their full force, and it immediately shut the illusion down.
But it had already taken me too long.
All of the damage I’d managed to hit her with was healed in the time it took to get free.
Worse, she actually looked a little healthier, unlike when I’d first come, now she was really pissed.
Her claws started to close around my throat, and I ducked back.
Which, I found out the next second, meant I was now literally against a wall.
In a desperate move, I started dragging the life from the very air around me.
Essence snapped along my every synapse as it built, at the same time as the house’s atmosphere screamed in agony.
Before she knew what was happening, I launched forward and brought a right cross directly into her jaw.
The essence released on impact, and she was sent wheeling back.
I’d screwed up enough for one day, so I used the opportunity to duck around her and go for the door.
I made it about halfway before a freezing hand closed on my forearm, stopping me dead where I stood.
Another hand filled my vision, and the ground vanished from under me.
My already painful body was flooded with a torrent of pure, liquid agony that blinded me entirely.
Thankfully, it only lasted a few seconds before I came back to the world around me.
My vision, greyed and blurred as it was, took a second to realize I was staring up at a giant hole in the wall, plaster and wood decimated beneath it.
I shoved the pain down to be dealt with when indulging in it wouldn’t kill me, and pushed myself back up.
By the time my wobbling and shaking form was standing, she’d climbed outside of her house through the hole.
I briefly hoped she was just stronger than her age, but when she walked into the sunlight, that died.
Not that it was surprising, given her ability to take me under, even as weak as it had been.
I started backing away faster with her every slow pace forward.
“That fear’s nice. It’ll make you taste so much sweeter while I drain you dry,” she sneered.
She paused in her steps, then, and that thoughtful look formed again as she canted her head to the side.
“Actually, better idea. Death’s too fast. I think I’ll turn you, instead.”
“Doesn’ work on Fae,” I returned.
It was really the only thing going for me, just then.
“Oh, for the purebloods, that’s certainly true,” she agreed easily.
Dread crept down my spine the second she left the statement hanging.
It wasn’t often that I felt uneducated, and that unspoken but was horrific.
She seemed to have been waiting for it to hit me, because she grinned when it did.
“But you’re not a pureblood, now, are you? No, you’re, at most, three quarters. They’re the only creatures that are immune. And there’s something else in your blood that isn’t quite so immune, now, is there?”
I froze, and my heart started ramming into my chest as horrific possibilities started going through me.
If I was turned, things could get very ugly.
Makers had the ability to force their ghouls to do whatever they commanded, and with the powers and knowledge I had, that could be catastrophic.
Some part of me, though, kicked the fear back, and a burst of inspiration came to me.
“Well, c’mon, then,” I huffed.
She paused, and the wariness I’d been hoping for set in her gaze.
“I’m immune ta’ yer geas. Tha’s how tha’ psychic compulsion works. So ya’ turn me? I come outta’ it with a vamp’s strength an’ metabolism on top a’ what I can throw already, an’ you come outta’ it with Lucas hella’ pissed an’ no Fae ghoul ta’ placate ‘im with.”
“You’re speculating,” she scoffed.
It didn’t sound as confident as she probably hoped.
“Ya’ ever turn a demi-Fae? Got experience ta’ back yer confidence on tha’ up?”
“Please. You’d lose the will to resist like any mortal, special blood or not. Without that will, as we’ve just demonstrated, I can get in.”
“Maybe. But I’ve also jus’ demonstrated I’m not just some Halfling, now, haven’ I? I’m willin’ ta’ bet my blood straight from the Le Fey’s line can beat yer vamp mojo.”
She actually laughed at that, the sound grating and painful on my pain-heightened senses.
“Your name’s Morgana, and you think you’re a descendent of that witch? You Celts and your egos, I swear,” she mocked.
In response, I reached a shaky hand up and grabbed my right wrist.
Chaith mé dhuit ar shiúl, róin a scarann na ríochtaí, agus nochtann branda mo chuid fola ar!”
Magic rushed across my skin, and I nearly passed out as my blood started humming in tune with it.
Janet watched in surprise as my skin flared bright green, for a few seconds.
In the burst of smoke that ensued after it was gone, her vampire-given vision was able to pick up on the ornate scar there.
“That’s-”
Mallacht Sí,” I hissed. “I don’ boast ‘bout it, but my family’s the only one with the mark this generation.”
The mark vanished as quickly as it had appeared, but it definitely left an impression with her.
It tended to do that, and the simmering burn that spread through my entire right side like a virus would be worth it if it meant she wouldn’t attempt to turn me.
“Now, I’ll ask ya’ again. Ya’ gonna’ kill me outright, or ya’ gonna’ gamble with the potential of unleashing somethin’ even yer leech of a leader couldn’t handle?”
“T-that doesn’t mean anything,” she argued. “For all you know, it could turn you into a ghoul without any intelligence or skill. A braindead husk, borne from blood that rejects the transformation even as it happens until you’re hollowed out.”
The thought had occurred to me, and I found myself really wishing I’d brought more than just a single gun.
“Well, no point guessin’. Kill me or inject me. Either way, I can’t fight ya’ anymore, so le’s not drag it out anymore.”
She straightened out, and her fangs flashed at me as she hissed.
“You face death with dignity. I can respect that.”
She started heading for me once more, her hands coiling to form claws.
There was something to be said about my life, when a shredded throat was the least awful scenario to end a day on.
Something in the air changed at the same time she lunged.
Since the gods usually had twisted senses of humor when it came to me, I wasn’t exactly the type to believe in miracles.
Seeing a vampire shot down by a lightning bolt coming from nowhere, though, was pretty impossible to talk about with any other word.
She released a loud, echoing shriek as the electricity coursed through her.
The fact that the lightning had struck when the sky was completely clear was only a small concern.
Most of my attention was focused on backing away from her reaching hands, which would likely stop my heart if they touched me.
I managed, barely, to keep out of her desperate grabs until she fell to the ground in a spasming, limp pile.
And then, I was in the same state, though much less burned and smoking.
If I had an ounce of strength left, I would’ve been going for my car a few steps away, looking for anything that could help me.
Because she wasn’t dead, and that meant that her vampiric healing was going to bring her back a lot faster than I could recover.
“H-how d-d-did yo-ou dooo that!?” she snarled.
“Ya’ think I wouldn’ a thrown tha’ at ya’ the secon’ we got out ‘ere if I could?” I groaned.
“G-gods on y-yourrr s-side? W-w-w-what aaa joke.”
I was inclined to agree.
With nothing to do but wait for my death, I started looking around for what had saved me.
And then I found him.
Collin was leaning against my car, his eyes narrowed dangerously on Janet and his eyes glowing pure gold.
He pushed off and walked to my side, his aura rushing through the air in its usual flamboyant fashion.
Normally, it kind of got on my nerves, to have his psyche always pressing at my defenses, but just then, it felt like a balm to my entire soul.
When he knelt at my side, I realized it was intentional, as his fingers continued making gestures I couldn’t follow.
His expression softened when he finally broke his glare and looked down at me.
“You seemed to be having trouble.”
“Miss Dewitt’s ghoul is not any kinda’ indication,” I groaned.

“Looks that way. The ghoul’s in custody now. I hurried over, but I was half assuming you’d have her in cuffs until you broke the seal.”

Translation Notes
Aduro- Latin: "Scorch, burn, set fire to, etc."

Chaith mé dhuit ar shiúl,  róin a scarann na ríochtaí, agus nochtann branda mo chuid fola ar!”- Gaelic: "I cast thee away, seal which separates the realms, and reveal my blood's brand!"
"Mallacht Sí”- Gaelic: "Curse of Faery"

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